Evaluating My Music Video

So I have looked at my finished music video over 10 times, and I have observe a little work that needs to be tweaking that needs doing.

At 3mins and 48secs - As a audience, we seen the stage too much, I decided to cut off the stage.

At 58 secs - Make the poster longer, so the audience can see it and understands what coming next.

At the beginning, where the young Beyonce is in her bedroom, I am going to change into different colour maybe in sepia or black and white, so it looks like its in the past and its coming into the future.

At 1mins and 44secs - Cut off the Ghost shot

At 4mins 14 secs - Super slow motion

At 1 min 11secs - Cut on the beat